You in Yourself

You in yourself,

treasure your secrets

inside a trance,

as your greatest work of art.

You lay them down  

as your reality

among the colorful leaves

then let them lie….

to your heart.

 

I simply wait

as your diamond

for you to turn the pages

of my body

while you sing.

I’m left dreaming of your smile

within a roaring tide

believing your time….

is everything.

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Copyright @2014 - Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

Reviews

[Georgiana S]

Always beautiful writing Neva

[wordman]

seems we all want or need to be unraveled

[light and ashes]

Reminds me of me and how much I love my secrets, but sometimes secrets really need to be revealed, a great and beautiful poem.

[Jvl narasimharao]

It is great as always, my poetic muse

[Allen Smuckler]

You have a way with the loving poem.. you bring us right into your world...

[Sleepless]

Have not read your writing in some time, and I come back and it is still as wonderful as before. This was a great read, I love how your writing paints your emotions as you pour your heart. Truly amazing.

[Poeticme]

Loved it!!....Very well penned my lady. Thanks for sharing

Poeticme

[Sukriti Suki]

i like it. its descriptive and very well written.

[guy drori]

Strong imagery, and the image at the top of the page defnitely added.
"I wait as your diamond" is a line i really liked - your usage of words was well.
Nice write :)

[Ahmad Cox]

This was very pretty. I really enjoyed it.