My Heart Bleeds in Every Shade of You

I hear my fate

surrounding your every touch

and my heart bleeds

in every shade of you.

Because of you,

the colors of my life

have become

a golden sea of happiness,

your sweet love........

breathes into.

You fulfill every dream

that has ever exhaled

into the deepest parts

of my heart.

Dearest,

my soul runs to you whispering,

“I have arrived

with no end to my trust,

from your side..........

I will not part”.

Reviews

[Sheila Kline]

Your words are so lovely they take my breath away! The title sets the tone for the poem and you carry it through with a golden sea of happiness as your soul runs whispering........I hush my sounds and hear your devotion and love shouting 'cross the sea of love!!

[Mark]

Very beautiful Neva! Lovely write from a lovely lady. Glad to see you come around once in awhile. :)

[TL Boehm]

no end to my trust. That is how love should be. This is such a beautiful write.

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This is a very magnificent piece. Thank you for your review.


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[Jack...]

Beautiful Neva, Charming and romantic, love lives within these words.

[Zachary_James]

I am speechless Neva. absolutely beautiful..

[Frieda P]

Breathtakingly lovely Neva.

[Cassie]

Very very nice. I loved every bit of this poem, you have done it excellently and managed to keep your readers engrossed, the ending of it. I can not say more. Good one

[Baby Ricochet]

Stunning and beautiful. Outstanding

[dillonjensen]

A passionate take on what love can be, beautiful.