My Heart Bleeds in Every Shade of You

I hear my fate

surrounding your every touch

and my heart bleeds

in every shade of you.

Because of you,

the colors of my life

have become

a golden sea of happiness,

your sweet love........

breathes into.

You fulfill every dream

that has ever exhaled

into the deepest parts

of my heart.

Dearest,

my soul runs to you whispering,

“I have arrived

with no end to my trust,

from your side..........

I will not part”.

Reviews

[Sheila Kline]

Your words are so lovely they take my breath away! The title sets the tone for the poem and you carry it through with a golden sea of happiness as your soul runs whispering........I hush my sounds and hear your devotion and love shouting 'cross the sea of love!!

[Bobbie Coelho]

Very deep, and full of lvoe.

[Kenneth The Poet]

Stunning, just stunning. I love it.

[emmajoy]

Your title for this poem is absolute magic - or is it absolute and magical sincerity. The words from start to finish are heart.romping beauty. Won't say more, can't .. caught in your poetic bubble.

[Morgan Storms]

Love it. I am trying to think of the right words, but all I can come up with is beautiful.

[MOON]

Beautiful as usual full of love and promise.

[Melobldnfr]

Oh Neva, I absolutely love this write! Every bit! Every word! To bleed in every shade of someone emotes and is indicative of energy, vibration, sound, and spirituality. How truly wonderful! I love it!

[Rebecca Buller]

"...my soul runs to you whispering,
I have arrived..."
So very beautiful, Neva. And the picture you posted with this is ooh-la-la. Thank you for sharing:)

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and hopeful poem. I could feel the desire in the words. Good to find joy and happiness in another. I like the complete poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[SHEEMA HUQ]

I felt both moved and slightly sad about how the real sense of togetherness is so invaluable ( yet is forgotten when couples drift apart and /or the relationship ends acrimoniously....this usually means that at least one partner has completely forgotten how they used to feel during intimacy as a loving couple, and if one partner has responded to the break up very badly, it is probably because they still remember what, really special tenderness between them, really meant ), you have captured the experience perfectly....lovely work.

[Ruth]

How beautiful! Made me smile...your work always did and will xx