Breath of a Rose - Spokenword Video

A new spokenword poetry video

Is there no breath in a glowing roses dream
After the night has scattered
None so fair warms a heart it seems
Or equals a breath
That matters

When the night is over in a golden sense
Climbing up above the sea
Would you care or take offense
If a dreaming rose
Could no longer breathe

What follows until the last light shines
Within all your memories
Inside small spaces are you so inclined
To be the dreaming rose
That still breathes

Do you dream willingly, continuing to bloom
After the night has scattered
As you take each breath do you presume
That which warms your heart
To be what matters

Reviews

[cartera]

Excellent voice and intonation. I have mentioned your accent before; it certainly lends a lot to the meaningful message of the poem.
I think we should all try this spokenvideo format.
A lovely poem. One to come back to. Right now it is my bedtime, so I am going to make this my last and take the sound and words of the poem to my slumber.
Night. Night, Neva Flores. And thanks.
ATB
Alex.

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Cartera :) I am so glad you enjoyed it :)

[JM Russell]

I love the ending---I love the beginning---I love the middle. A lovely written poem.

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you JM :)

[Michael G.]

This is lovely and charming. I really enjoyed the whole presentation. It reads easily and it sounds fantastic.
You did excellent work here.

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Michael ;)

[ba_mcfarlane]

Exquisite words, spoken in a gentle and sweet way...wonderous...thank you for sharing.

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you BA :)

[Lover Of Words]

Stunning

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Kelsey :)

[Tarry Franck]

Wow - you have such talent - this is stunning :)

[Thisiscrae]

This is so beautiful

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you The A :)

[Dr. Wood ?]

you keep on doing it for ME anyway..thank you

[Bobbie Coelho]

Lovely

[Yasmin]

woow...
You have talent my dear friend and this is beyond amazing...
"When the night is over in a golden sense
Climbing up above the sea
Would you care or take offense
If a dreaming rose
Could no longer breathe"
Magical
I can say nothing more to express how I felt while reading this but I can tell that I have enjoyed this a lot
Well done