Ink Burned Upon My Name

An unfading melody fills my life
with a beauty
that covers my scars with ink
of a rhyme's desire
I can’t dismiss.  
And  I remember,
some things, move smooth as silk
like  laughter filled words
of a lover’s kiss.

The ink
which is burned upon my name
sleeps with my every hope
searching only…….
for happiness.  
It looks at me with an expectant face
in those moments
when my mind can’t rest.

The slightest touch of this  melody
leaves me waiting to shine  
with outstretched hands.  
My heart overflows with the beauty
of a thousand lights
changing color
at my command.

I can feel
the ink of my soul
writing……
on each and every breath
this melody breathes.  
While the ink burned upon my name
finds the happiness
it needs.

Author's Note

What can I say? I just love to write.

***Artist: Fidel Garcia

Reviews

[Veronica Chandler]

First things first, I could not move my gaze from the image which graces your work for several minutes; simply captivating, and well suited to this lovely work. I find it would be easier to hold my breath than to still my pen. This work so perfectly captures the love you have for your well honed craft. Bravo!

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Veronica :)

[Veronica Chandler]

You are most welcome Neva

[Mark]

To write is a sort of happiness. Almost a physical sensation, like a good meal or a good... well. you get the idea. Lovely poem. :)

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Mark :)

[Art Sun]

how creation can linger from within and be so melodious when it is inked upon the minds of those who search for those special moments...nice work Neva....

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Art :)

[Leigh]

What you use to cover your scars is no ordinary sticking plaster, but a powerful enhancing tool, that not only uplifts you but others around you. Your ability to express yourself like this is a gift. Love the painting also. Leigh

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Leigh :)

[cartera]

Through the love of writing you are what you want to be: happy.
Captures the feelings that I sometimes have when the muse hits me and flows.
Good stuff.
ATB
Alex.

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Alex :)

[Lily Mae]

This made me smile.. I saw the words in the ink as I read on..and it was about you getting that slice of love and happiness that you so deserve.. :) beautiful as always Neva...xo

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Lily Mae :)

[Enid Blake]

I would describe this as inspiring. You made me want to pick up the pen and join you in that feeling.

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Enid :)

[KAREN]

Beautiful, and deeply felt within my soul!
100/100

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Storiestotell :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Artwork and poetry was amazing. Always a journey into thoughts and emotion in your poetry. I like the way you led the reader to a positive ending. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Coyote :)

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Now, how did you think of "Ink burned upon my name"? You're an amazing writer Neva.

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you. I love to weave words together that are not usually used. :)

[Mehak Mushtaq]

And you do it beautifully. :)

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you so much XX

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Anytime.