My Constant
A Poem by
Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
This is an ancient truth
held by the hand of time
and cannot be concealed
You are My
Constant, touching my skies
and
surrounding me with the pleasure
of your
existence.
This is an
ancient truth
held by the
hand of time
and cannot be
concealed
or brought
down,
futile is
resistance.
I will never
exhibit thorns
in between my
words
or to your
feelings
when walking
alone
on the shores
of my sea.
You are My
Constant,
sailing always
in the back of my mind,
a ship flying
your colors
to the port of
me.
You are My
Constant.
The one I can
never forget.
Without words
you have spoken
to my heart
all these
years.
You are my
sun,
the light of
all my hope.
My Constant,
the one I hold
inside my heart,
most dear.
© 2013 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Author's Note
Artist: Joseph Edward Southall
Featured Review
"There is no fear in Love for perfect Love casts out fear because fear involves torment." 1st John Holy Bible
We come to Love because Love comes to us...in our minds...our hearts...our consciences. Wonderful thoughts here well presented. Bless.
Posted 11 Years Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you Fabian :)
Reviews
Your poetry is romantic, old school, with a new twist. I love the repetition of "You are my constant"...really beautiful poem, great job.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Your poetry is romantic, old school, with a new twist. I love the repetition of "You are my constant"...really beautiful poem, great job.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you Lizzy :)
11 Years Ago
No problem! You've really impressed me. You have a fan over here:)
wow. you are showing what love really should be. Love is not fear, it does not hate. that's something lost om the younger people. thank you. you just cleared up a really big problem I was having :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
wow. you are showing what love really should be. Love is not fear, it does not hate. that's something lost om the younger people. thank you. you just cleared up a really big problem I was having :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you Katie, so glad to help :)
Neva once again another great write showing the one this drunken hampster will never have class.
Im always a fan and with writes such as these its so very easy to see why tremendous write my friend stay crazy Gonzo
Posted 11 Years Ago
Neva once again another great write showing the one this drunken hampster will never have class.
Im always a fan and with writes such as these its so very easy to see why tremendous write my friend stay crazy Gonzo
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you Gonzo. So good to see you :)
This is beautifully written, so soft and flowing and full of never ending love, the sort of love we all attain to.
Posted 11 Years Ago
This is beautifully written, so soft and flowing and full of never ending love, the sort of love we all attain to.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you Carolann ;)
Southall's richly coloured painting. the woman looking into a distance place, she waiting, wanting .. is perfect. Your words as ever and always are as rich and finely threaded. I love your work, pure and simple, Neva. Reading a second time, i realise that it's not merely a poem to love but to desire, passion, lust: fired and ready - 'futile in resistance'
Posted 11 Years Ago
Southall's richly coloured painting. the woman looking into a distance place, she waiting, wanting .. is perfect. Your words as ever and always are as rich and finely threaded. I love your work, pure and simple, Neva. Reading a second time, i realise that it's not merely a poem to love but to desire, passion, lust: fired and ready - 'futile in resistance'
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you Emma :)
Love the picture so full of colour. Thwe poem is a beautiful love poem. so tender and loving.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Love the picture so full of colour. Thwe poem is a beautiful love poem. so tender and loving.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you John :)
As always Neva,
your poetic words
so elegant and true,
woven with beauty
spun by you
Posted 11 Years Ago
As always Neva,
your poetic words
so elegant and true,
woven with beauty
spun by you
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you Lorena ;)
Like this one and for some reason the 2nd stanza I kept reading
I will never exhibit thorns
in between my thighs
MMmm wishful thinking ;)
Posted 11 Years Ago
Like this one and for some reason the 2nd stanza I kept reading
I will never exhibit thorns
in between my thighs
MMmm wishful thinking ;)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks A. I can't stop laughin g;)
11 Years Ago
;) well I can dream
Beautiful work, Neva. Very gentle and simple, yet depth in meaning makes it, amazing.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Beautiful work, Neva. Very gentle and simple, yet depth in meaning makes it, amazing.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you Sanjeeta :)
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Added on January 15, 2013
Last Updated on January 15, 2013
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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm GA
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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia.
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