My Constant

My Constant

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
"

This is an ancient truth held by the hand of time and cannot be concealed

"


You are My Constant, touching my skies

and surrounding me with the pleasure

of your existence.

This is an ancient truth

held by the hand of time

and cannot be concealed

or brought down,

futile is resistance.


I will never exhibit thorns

in between my words

or to your feelings

when walking alone

on the shores of my sea.

You are My Constant,

sailing always in the back of my mind,

a ship flying your colors

to the port of me.


You are My Constant.

The one I can never forget.

Without words you have spoken

to my heart

all these years.

You are my sun,

the light of all my hope.

My Constant,

the one I hold inside my heart,

most dear.

© 2013 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


Author's Note

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Artist: Joseph Edward Southall

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Featured Review

"There is no fear in Love for perfect Love casts out fear because fear involves torment." 1st John Holy Bible

We come to Love because Love comes to us...in our minds...our hearts...our consciences. Wonderful thoughts here well presented. Bless.



Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

11 Years Ago

Thank you Fabian :)



Reviews

Your poetry is romantic, old school, with a new twist. I love the repetition of "You are my constant"...really beautiful poem, great job.


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

11 Years Ago

Thank you Lizzy :)
Lizzy B

11 Years Ago

No problem! You've really impressed me. You have a fan over here:)
wow. you are showing what love really should be. Love is not fear, it does not hate. that's something lost om the younger people. thank you. you just cleared up a really big problem I was having :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

11 Years Ago

Thank you Katie, so glad to help :)
Neva once again another great write showing the one this drunken hampster will never have class.
Im always a fan and with writes such as these its so very easy to see why tremendous write my friend stay crazy Gonzo

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

11 Years Ago

Thank you Gonzo. So good to see you :)
This is beautifully written, so soft and flowing and full of never ending love, the sort of love we all attain to.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

11 Years Ago

Thank you Carolann ;)
Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Welcome :)
Southall's richly coloured painting. the woman looking into a distance place, she waiting, wanting .. is perfect. Your words as ever and always are as rich and finely threaded. I love your work, pure and simple, Neva. Reading a second time, i realise that it's not merely a poem to love but to desire, passion, lust: fired and ready - 'futile in resistance'

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

11 Years Ago

Thank you Emma :)
Love the picture so full of colour. Thwe poem is a beautiful love poem. so tender and loving.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

11 Years Ago

Thank you John :)
As always Neva,

your poetic words
so elegant and true,
woven with beauty
spun by you

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

11 Years Ago

Thank you Lorena ;)
Like this one and for some reason the 2nd stanza I kept reading
I will never exhibit thorns
in between my thighs

MMmm wishful thinking ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

11 Years Ago

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks A. I can't stop laughin g;)
Aidz

11 Years Ago

;) well I can dream
Beautiful work, Neva. Very gentle and simple, yet depth in meaning makes it, amazing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

11 Years Ago

Thank you Sanjeeta :)

Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

1890 Views
50 Reviews
Rating
Shelved in 3 Libraries
Added on January 15, 2013
Last Updated on January 15, 2013
Tags: constant, heart, time, ship, sea

Author

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

GA



About
Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

Writing