There's a moment between wakefulness and sleep, sometimes quite magical, other times almost scary. Maybe, just maybe this is that moment where reality is about to be chased away for a while, when the dormant spiritual is beckoning. And that stores a thought, a person, an event, an emotion with enormous intensity. I don't quite know but this is how your words talk to this reviewer.
It feels the light is that feeling of warmth and love you get in your stomach ands when you closed your eyes you were imagining your loved one as you drifted. Nice
Artwork and poetry was amazing.
"Because I yearned to hear your words,
know my life was in your presence."
Good to need another to create hope and happiness. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote
i think i could learn a lot from you about the elegance of near-rhymes.
your use of them really is an eloquent touch, and, as in this poem, there are beautiful results.
nicely done on this, neva
Such a beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing! Keep up the good work because I usually need my NEVA fix for the day. And I got it now, so I feel much better. You are so talented. All your writings are so good. My hat's off to you dear friend.
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11 Years Ago
thank you Tarry. I used to write every day but found I needed to back off and review more than I wr.. read morethank you Tarry. I used to write every day but found I needed to back off and review more than I write. We learn much from others.
There's a moment between wakefulness and sleep, sometimes quite magical, other times almost scary. Maybe, just maybe this is that moment where reality is about to be chased away for a while, when the dormant spiritual is beckoning. And that stores a thought, a person, an event, an emotion with enormous intensity. I don't quite know but this is how your words talk to this reviewer.
Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia.
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