Seconds Within Your Light

Seconds Within Your Light

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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Coming through the night I feel strange seconds within a familiar light.

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Coming through the night I feel strange seconds

within a familiar light.

Here is where my imagination led me to think

no one heard my plight.


Still I smiled in wonder, though the darkness

seemed stronger every second.

Because I yearned to hear your words,

know my life was in your presence.


I bade farewell to the night , closed my eyes

let those seconds pass right by.

As that familiar light that came inside,

kept your face within my sight.

© 2013 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


Author's Note

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
artist *Jose Parra

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There's a moment between wakefulness and sleep, sometimes quite magical, other times almost scary. Maybe, just maybe this is that moment where reality is about to be chased away for a while, when the dormant spiritual is beckoning. And that stores a thought, a person, an event, an emotion with enormous intensity. I don't quite know but this is how your words talk to this reviewer.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

11 Years Ago

thank you Emma ;)



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No one heard my plight , poignant and deep. Elegant write .

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

11 Years Ago

thank you Moon :)
Your relation to the senses and time really brought me into the moment you were describing, lovely romantic write, full of longing and tenderness

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

11 Years Ago

thank you Leigh :)
A very soft and loving write, perhaps one of someone daydreaming. Very easily read, the rhythm is great.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

11 Years Ago

thank you Becky, I steered back into the way I wrote poetry when I first began 3 years ago.
This to me sounds like a dream, dreaming of someone who has either moved on to the next phase in the soul's journey or of someone who moved physically in a different direction in this life on earth. It has deep tones of longing mixed with a sprinkle of calm. Beautifully written in your own unique voice and tone that I have come to love reading over the years. I oddly find something soothing about this piece. maybe it is the word choices and the slow flow of the piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

11 Years Ago

thank you poetic beauty :)
Poetic Beauty

11 Years Ago

You are more than welcome
so pretty as usual!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

11 Years Ago

thank you so much Rachel :)
Gave me chills in my soul. I thought of my sister whilst I read this. It's beautifully written Neva, has tremendous impact in it's subtlety.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

11 Years Ago

thank you Frieda :)
A very strong poem can be interpreted in many ways...
different for different readers based on their experiences....
for me...speaks of a deep tender love between two souls :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

11 Years Ago

thank you Yas, I thought you had left us. Good to see you.
Here you are, capturing the moment,all moments of beauty in thought, bound together in your words,removing time ,removing place,adding only grace and purity,what a irresistible flavor, to close my eyes stand in the saddle and let my horse lope through the nights tall grass.You are blessed.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

11 Years Ago

Thank you Lee :)
Very striking an artistically composed :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

11 Years Ago

thank you Levi :)
Levi Levin

11 Years Ago

Your welcome :)
An eloquent description of that fragile moment between asleep and awake. And the artwork just ties it all off. . . Beautiful, simply beautiful.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

11 Years Ago

thank you Mercanta :)

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Added on January 5, 2013
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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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