Speechless Hearts

Deep within the ways I love you

lies a valley, 

where my wandering footsteps 

find no boundaries.

Hands held in hands

Drift amongst the pearls

Silent in emotion

I know you are mine

You are not my world, 

Am I yours?

Speechless be our hearts

Same sun, different moons.

The air we breathe 

Tasting of honeysuckle

Embedded on a memory

On a lifetime of love

A collaboration by Neva Flores and Aidz Giannini

Author's Note

A collaboration by Aidz Giannini and Neva Flores

Artist *Tony Chow

Reviews

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Neva love, this collaboration of Gianni and you is marvelous... it reaches deeper than many writes, and feelings, the way you two are dwelled in perfection, I learn much from.
I guess this one is pure....

"You're not my world, Am I yours" good profound questions, as I as a free mind always believe in freedom, not owning. This reached my core, and to both of you my best wishes! hugs xo Exceptional writing.

E.L.

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Sweet Sister, he has been a wonderful mentor and is very easy to write with. He seems to see right through all of my BS and calls me on it. A trait I admire in men brave enough to do it to me. LOL!

Yes, I do love men who have this sixth sense too. They are needed in this bad world now days, for we can get lost.... I'm grateful to be here, Neva, as I will be more in main time... I've so missed you and your writings, as I will check Aidz out too! I have a lot to catch up with :-)

* I am sorry for misspelled his name, Giannini.... in Italian plurals for Gianni.... (John in English). I'm too Italian I overlooked lol

[Aidz]

Yes Giannini is last name first name Adriano shhhh ;)

:-D

[jacob erin-cilberto]

for evey mountain there is a valley...and love is like that...there is doubt here even as the speaker loves..

"you are not my world" not sure if the speaker is saying that trying to deny she needs him...and yet she asks...
"am i yours?" in other words do you need me?

or is it that we just Want each other so much...that the air we breathe is simply love inhaled and exhaled.

jacob

[Aidz]

thnx :)

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Erin :)

[emmajoy]

A gentleness of words, a love and a love of words linked together beautifully. There are meanings and thoughts in these stanzas, could be misunderstood, could be hugged close. Not selecting one phrase, line or stanza as a favourite, the entire piece is that - though i could choose .. no .. :)

(review also with Aidz)

[Aidz]

thnx Em again :)

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

you are a hoot Emma thank you so much :)

[FJ Davis]

Work you can both be proud of.

[Aidz]

:)

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Feank :) X

[Frieda P]

Phenomenal collaboration. The spaces in between your love is charming. Giving each room to grow yet be loved. I love it. Kudos to you both.

[Aidz]

thnx Freida

[kelvin]

Very nice read seems as if you two plugged a cord into both your heads and where writing on the same level singing a duet but a good duet. As always keep writing fellow writer.

[Aidz]

:) would be a long cord

[kelvin]

hahaha yes maybe but it seems it was a long enough cord.

[Aidz]

;)

[Lily Mae]

I love collabs and when they are right they are right and this one is that and more.. If flows smoothly and all you can feel is the love and passion..xo

[Aidz]

thnx Lily

[Lily Mae]

Your welcome.. I thank the two of you..xo

[Muse]

You two write brilliantly together! I have not a clue where you started penning, and where he began. SMoooth...evocative...and stunning.

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

thank you Muse.......I have learned much from him and he is great to write with

[Muse]

I've tried co-writes..not my cup of tea...as most of you know..I march to my own drum. lol

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

I normally do too. He just about had to beat me over the head to get me to do the first one we ever wrote together LOL

[Muse]

Well good for you two. Do another for us please. ;)

[Muse]

Geesh Neva..you left out all the juicy stuff...how about a note to the reader? lol

[Muse]

Blushing Neva...you know it's the quiet ones that make the most noise. bwaha ha ha ha

okay..I'll behave now.

[Muse]

that's not fair...

I'm sure your imput would be heavily laced with metaphors...overly exaggerated....

Besides, I can watch that on the Discovery channel. :P

[Muse]

it's in my head too...lol...no sleep tonight!

[Muse]

Neva...I must apologize...we dirtied up your beautiful poem.

[Muse]

reverse....

quote "Well I did bring hand cuffs and wine ;)"

It was all over after that.

[Ahmad Cox]

Wow amazing and beautiful collaboration.

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you. The first time I wrote one of these I thought it would be hard. It actually isn't.

[Ahmad Cox]

Nice. It was definitely very beautiful

[Aidz]

and a pleasure it is Neva

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you to the one I have written with the most.

[Aidz]

:)