Speechless Hearts

Deep within the ways I love you

lies a valley, 

where my wandering footsteps 

find no boundaries.

Hands held in hands

Drift amongst the pearls

Silent in emotion

I know you are mine

You are not my world, 

Am I yours?

Speechless be our hearts

Same sun, different moons.

The air we breathe 

Tasting of honeysuckle

Embedded on a memory

On a lifetime of love

A collaboration by Neva Flores and Aidz Giannini

Author's Note

A collaboration by Aidz Giannini and Neva Flores

Artist *Tony Chow

Reviews

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Neva love, this collaboration of Gianni and you is marvelous... it reaches deeper than many writes, and feelings, the way you two are dwelled in perfection, I learn much from.
I guess this one is pure....

"You're not my world, Am I yours" good profound questions, as I as a free mind always believe in freedom, not owning. This reached my core, and to both of you my best wishes! hugs xo Exceptional writing.

E.L.

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Sweet Sister, he has been a wonderful mentor and is very easy to write with. He seems to see right through all of my BS and calls me on it. A trait I admire in men brave enough to do it to me. LOL!

Yes, I do love men who have this sixth sense too. They are needed in this bad world now days, for we can get lost.... I'm grateful to be here, Neva, as I will be more in main time... I've so missed you and your writings, as I will check Aidz out too! I have a lot to catch up with :-)

* I am sorry for misspelled his name, Giannini.... in Italian plurals for Gianni.... (John in English). I'm too Italian I overlooked lol

[Aidz]

Yes Giannini is last name first name Adriano shhhh ;)

:-D

[Adam Whitworth]

ooh, i like this one. 'same sun, different moons', cool xx :)

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

thank you Adam :)

[Pax]

Deep within the ways I love you lies a valley
~ now that's really nice and sweet. The passion of love blooms in the gentle words of the poem.
Great Collab!

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Pax :)

[Anna]

Very beautiful writing :)

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

thank you Anna :)

[Chris]

Wow! this one is..is incredible. Wonderful flow and filled with emotion and love. Nice one. Keep writing!

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Chris, I always enjoy writing with Aidz Giannini

[quinfinn]

as always Neva, i am enamored with your words , as you choose them so delicately and there is almost no seam herein for the collaboration, which is excellent. but one word in this stands out and i can't dislodge this feeling of awkwardness...wait! this cannot be! a word in one of your lines is driving me crazy because it does not work! "speechless BE our hearts".....ouch! maybe it is only me, but "be" just sounds wrong when you read this aloud. other than that, i love this write...adore it.

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

I think you are right I will touch base with A. and see what he wants to do thanks my sweet friend :)

[quinfinn]

you will always get honesty from me, my dear friend...i thought about this and you know what really works? "speechless, our hearts" just a thought!

[Aidz]

sounds fine to me, try it with a different accent

[Hamza]

"The air we breathe
Tasting of honeysuckle
Embedded on a memory
On a lifetime of love"

love explained in the best possible way i can think of ..
so emotional and so real ...
wish i could relate to this.. very beautiful ..

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

thank you Hamza :)

[Aidz]

:)

[fireblossom]

You make a good team. Same sun different moons says it well.

:-)

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Jan :)

[Aidz]

:)

[LA Lorena]

I read and reviewed this on Aidz page, but had to come here to tell you how much I enjoyed this collaboration. I never would have thought your two distinct styles could have meshed so well together, but they have done just that. A lovely offering of poetry from your conjoined pens.

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Lorena :)

[MOON]

Lovely flow collaboration, all the questions of love like playing the devils advocate.

[Aidz]

:)

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Moon :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Well written but apparently confused in its emotions. I read it at the begining as a love story but it changes and feels full of empty, love lost regret?

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

yep, I wrote the first stanza and I think it going that way is my fault. Geez, I wonder why:(

[Aidz]

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