Speechless Hearts

Deep within the ways I love you

lies a valley, 

where my wandering footsteps 

find no boundaries.

Hands held in hands

Drift amongst the pearls

Silent in emotion

I know you are mine

You are not my world, 

Am I yours?

Speechless be our hearts

Same sun, different moons.

The air we breathe 

Tasting of honeysuckle

Embedded on a memory

On a lifetime of love

A collaboration by Neva Flores and Aidz Giannini

Author's Note

A collaboration by Aidz Giannini and Neva Flores

Artist *Tony Chow

Reviews

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Neva love, this collaboration of Gianni and you is marvelous... it reaches deeper than many writes, and feelings, the way you two are dwelled in perfection, I learn much from.
I guess this one is pure....

"You're not my world, Am I yours" good profound questions, as I as a free mind always believe in freedom, not owning. This reached my core, and to both of you my best wishes! hugs xo Exceptional writing.

E.L.

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Sweet Sister, he has been a wonderful mentor and is very easy to write with. He seems to see right through all of my BS and calls me on it. A trait I admire in men brave enough to do it to me. LOL!

Yes, I do love men who have this sixth sense too. They are needed in this bad world now days, for we can get lost.... I'm grateful to be here, Neva, as I will be more in main time... I've so missed you and your writings, as I will check Aidz out too! I have a lot to catch up with :-)

* I am sorry for misspelled his name, Giannini.... in Italian plurals for Gianni.... (John in English). I'm too Italian I overlooked lol

[Aidz]

Yes Giannini is last name first name Adriano shhhh ;)

:-D

[Tarry Franck]

This flowed so well and was a delight to read as always my friend, Neva. Love this:

Speechless be our hearts
Same sun, different moons.

[Levi Levin]

Very Sweet:)

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Levi :)

[Levi Levin]

Your welcome Neva:)

[An owl on the moon]

What a tender, beautifully moving poem so perfectly painted by both of your brushes... May the world know such love in this New Year to come.

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

thank you Craig :)

[Cherrie Palmer]

On heat treads circumspectly while the other stands with heart laid open, I loved it a true waltz.

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

thank you Cherrie :)

[Acron 4]

wonderful collaboration. I generally can tell two different styles in collaboration, but not in this. I not sure why, unless it was edited after it was written. Wonderful poem......Thanks for sharing.

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Ron, no editing here and we wrote it in less than hour.

[Acron 4]

You guys are close, it's amazing

[C.C. Marx]

Sweet and romantic each word adds to the beauty great write!! :)

[Mark Anthony Games (Hum..]

This is utterly beautiful, so sensual and soft but will a power that could make a tsunami run the other direction! Very Very well done

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Human Voice :)

[Lover Of Words]

A very eye catching peice just by the title alone but the rest of is just as gripping wonderful job

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Kelsey :)

[Lover Of Words]

My pleasure :)

[lee von cleef]

a collaboration, two hearts, two minds give a dance, show us they care,and their thoughts are weighted weighted different, "You are not my world" wow Your are mine.

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

glad you noticed that. I'm not sure why but for some reason I give a romantic stanza then kick the male poet I am working with where it hurts. Perhaps I should stop doing romantic collabs. thanks :)

[lee von cleef]

Na, we are jerks,(men) and women should keep the upper hand,or we will all be wearing camouflage.