I sit among the winds of human souls
where darkness dares not speak
of storms that rock deep anguish
until it becomes
a fire inside you.
I sit among the winds of human souls where darkness dares not speak of storms that rock deep anguish until it becomes a fire inside you. These winds are more complete when they rest upon my tongue and get lost inside a dance crying “let me go” without use of a cold attitude.
No fear do I have of the years gone by, I barely knew of their passing. It seems as if their value has been exiled to a corner, left there to dream. So I can sit among the winds without a single care crashing in and demanding I have remorse for holding back the years self-esteem.
Where there is sinister intent and darkness clouds the sky, there are moments when the secrets of the wind chase the substance known as peace. I feel the heat against my body as I sit among the winds accepting kisses on my lips from years gone by, exiled............ begging for release.
I think we all at some point feel this volcanic feeling inside as if the world itself is trying to rip our limbs from our bodies. Within our own minds we are capable of finding peace of we simple take a moment. I like the strong details and the use of nature to represent the different emotions of this piece. It makes it strong and solid.
Sometimes I wonder if you leave us to guess the meaning behind your works, Neva. I can only wonder what goes through your mind as you pen these works of yours. I detect some bittersweet pain within this. I can also sense love and wistfulness of the past. I wonder if I am right.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thank you. Yes, I do leave it to the reader to interpret because I believe that poetry is personal... read moreThank you. Yes, I do leave it to the reader to interpret because I believe that poetry is personal. You happen to be spot on in what you sense. I appreciate the read and am glad to see you back.
I think we all at some point feel this volcanic feeling inside as if the world itself is trying to rip our limbs from our bodies. Within our own minds we are capable of finding peace of we simple take a moment. I like the strong details and the use of nature to represent the different emotions of this piece. It makes it strong and solid.
I don't know why I keep reading this poem, other then it's beautiful, and there are so many wonderful ideas in it. I have always thought God used the darkness, any darkness weather in us or that angel called darkness. I think most of us see those weaknesses in ourselves, the ones that hurt us. There's so much pain in us at times that all we can do is find something, anything to ease the pain until it goes away enough to where we can resume our lives. wonderful and beautiful poem ....... thank you so much Miss Neva for sharing this amazing poem.
Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia.
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