Two-Same View,Same Beat-One

Two-Same View,Same Beat-One

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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The fire of love removes all distance, chants your name until our bodies blur space and time and you and I find we are viewing the world through the same pair of eyes.

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The fire of love clings to hidden winds

and flourishes as it turns

without thought

to envelop the music

of your imagination.

It then peeks at the silence

created by its own tug of war

whispering..........

come one, come all,

feel this sensation.


The fire of love removes all distance,
chants your name
until our bodies  blur space and time
and you and I find
we are viewing the world
through the same pair of eyes.
Between our hearts
we both know
desire feeds the flame,
listen to them beat,
the rhythm.........
is now
the same.



© 2012 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


Author's Note

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Artist : Adam Martinakis

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i have always cherished the idea of two souls seeing through the same eyes. this poem has passion, fire and depth beyond what the written words tell. another beautifully crafted morsel of tenderness and love. Merry Christmas Neva. thank you for sharing this wonderful piece!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

11 Years Ago

Thank you Quinfinn :)



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Beautiful...one word I give your work...connection...
And profoundly so, I feel your words with energy :)
xox

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

11 Years Ago

Thank you Poppy :)
Merry Christmas, if the end of the world doesn't come first

Posted 11 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

U know my thoughts on this one Neva xxoo

Posted 11 Years Ago


Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

11 Years Ago

Thank you A :)
i like this...desire does feed the flame...but this is a more complete love poem and is about more than just physical desire...love shows itself in many ways...and you express it so well.

jacob

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

11 Years Ago

Thank you Jacob :)
Wow, wonderful romantic poem. I really felt it. And I love that picture, great piece :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

11 Years Ago

Thank you VocalDragon :)
Though anybody has the heart to love no matter how cold if allowed to enter. the more you think of you and the other the fire or strength of you love grows, making it where the distance doesn't mean anything to you you'll travel across the world to be with them your love for the other is on a level of the same outlook their hearts are playing the same song all equally in tuned. for love is a very powerful powerful feeling of emotion once its been awaken. Nicely written read here thank you for sharing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

11 Years Ago

Thank you Kelvin :)
kelvin

11 Years Ago

You're very welcome
This is very romantic and passionate, and I have to say that picture is really cool. Well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

11 Years Ago

Thank you Savannah :)
Sounds like the most enticing of love making, two hearts beating as one, it's soft and cozy like a lullaby. It's that love that two people who have been in tune with one another know, there's a special rhythm there. Really lovely.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

11 Years Ago

Thank you Frieda :)
well you nailed it again...Soft and powerful....Quite amazing

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

11 Years Ago

Thank you Dr Wood :)
i have always cherished the idea of two souls seeing through the same eyes. this poem has passion, fire and depth beyond what the written words tell. another beautifully crafted morsel of tenderness and love. Merry Christmas Neva. thank you for sharing this wonderful piece!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

11 Years Ago

Thank you Quinfinn :)

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Added on December 20, 2012
Last Updated on December 21, 2012
Tags: love, heart, eyes, beat, same, one, two, distance, soulmates

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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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