Two-Same View,Same Beat-One

The fire of love clings to hidden winds

and flourishes as it turns

without thought

to envelop the music

of your imagination.

It then peeks at the silence

created by its own tug of war

whispering..........

come one, come all,

feel this sensation.

The fire of love removes all distance,
chants your name
until our bodies  blur space and time
and you and I find
we are viewing the world
through the same pair of eyes.
Between our hearts
we both know
desire feeds the flame,
listen to them beat,
the rhythm.........
is now
the same.

Author's Note

Artist : Adam Martinakis

Reviews

[quinfinn]

i have always cherished the idea of two souls seeing through the same eyes. this poem has passion, fire and depth beyond what the written words tell. another beautifully crafted morsel of tenderness and love. Merry Christmas Neva. thank you for sharing this wonderful piece!

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Quinfinn :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing artwork and poetry.
"The fire of love removes all distance,
chants your name "
Love should be like a fire. We need to chant our lover's name. No weakness in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Danielle]

Very much enjoyed this lovely xpression of love!

[Leigh]

Nice intertwinement of words and meaning, this puts forward a great spiritual goal and many striking images too. Two souls are merging to be one in a great force of energy

[Becky C Strukamp]

The structure fits the poem well. It is a very touching poem of love, it was a joy to read it. Somewhat like the trickling of a spring rain against the window, so smooth and calm and refreshing!! Excellent poem Neva!

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Becky :)

[Tarry Franck]

So romantic, Enchanting, Sensual - Beautifully written!!!!
Between our hearts
we both know
desire feeds the flame,
listen to them beat,
the rhythm.........
is now
the same.
Loved this!!!!

[KAOlmsted]

This is an exquisite write; I could feel this like a drum beat...the beauty in the images you portray will stay with me for some time. Thank you so much for sharing this with us.

-kimmer

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you KAOLmsted :)

[RachelReaper]

this is passion on fire! Very powerfully elegant.
"until our bodies blur space and time" was my favorite line, because that's a beautiful way of description

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Rachel :)

[R J Askew]

Yes, love is life demanding we do its bidding. We talk of it as if it is an abstraction, but it is bigger than all of us, some elemental universal.

I esp like the 2nd verse here and eps the notion of seeing through one pair of eyes, which is actually what does happen when a child is the outcome as love intends it to be.

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Orlando :)

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a deep appreciation - not only of love, but of perception, feeling, poetry, and tantra.
i felt this poem

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Vajay:)

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Each time I come to read a new poem from you, words fully captivate me...
this one is so romantic and beautiful :)

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Yas :)