You Never Knew Me

I truly thought
I had found myself
in a wondrous place
where you could truly see me,
and that all my words
were forever immortalized.
Held close.......
inside of your everything,
soft......as a breeze.

I laughed as you stared
into my eyes, asking my name.
With my heart in your hands
and the moonlight
at your beck and call.
Then......watching you walk away,
I smiled.......
even though I realized
you never knew me
at all.

Reviews

[kelvin]

like love at first sight so to speak falling for someone on sight as you first speak to them in a state of lost for love snapping back to reality seeing the things between you such as love and time shared was only a sense of inner thinking in ones self for he don't even know you to love you. as always keep writing fellow writer

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

thank you Kelvin :)

[kelvin]

You're welcome

[Dr. Wood ?]

genuinely wonderful...

[Larry Dyson]

as your friend , my heart aches for where you write from..Laury

[Larry Dyson]

as your friend , my heart aches for where you write from..Laury

[Bobbie Coelho]

A hart-felt poem, so gentle but packs a punch when you get to the end, brilliant job.

[anxia]

Thats down right sweet!

[quinfinn]

i already wrote one review and it "buffered" for 5 minutes then disappeared, God only knows where those go....anyway, as i was saying, i have been there ...walking away with my heart in your hands. where you get your words is an amazing place. but you seem to flow right from your heart on many of the poems you write, and the words always find a way into mine. i love your romance poetry. it is the stuff of dreams and fantasy. thank you for asking me to read this. beautiful write!