You Never Knew Me

I truly thought
I had found myself
in a wondrous place
where you could truly see me,
and that all my words
were forever immortalized.
Held close.......
inside of your everything,
soft......as a breeze.

I laughed as you stared
into my eyes, asking my name.
With my heart in your hands
and the moonlight
at your beck and call.
Then......watching you walk away,
I smiled.......
even though I realized
you never knew me
at all.

Reviews

[kelvin]

like love at first sight so to speak falling for someone on sight as you first speak to them in a state of lost for love snapping back to reality seeing the things between you such as love and time shared was only a sense of inner thinking in ones self for he don't even know you to love you. as always keep writing fellow writer

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

thank you Kelvin :)

[kelvin]

You're welcome

[ba_mcfarlane]

My Dear Friend,
You may know already, I sometimes avoid responding to your review requests. It has nothing to do with you, your work.
Actually, I lie. It has everything to do with your writes. They are so honest to the point of feeling and being overwhelmed by your pain, love, loss, lust, joy. I take the easy way out, I don't respond. It is a challenge to go where you are feeling. Where you lay it out to share.

Today I respond. More often than not, your crafting of words, the intense theme that you always deliver, I will no longer avoid. Because you move me so, though I may not like where I end up, I trust that where you take me is a place I should consider. You already know how I flat out adore your muse.
B.

[Danielle]

Lovely! Perception sometimes a friend and other times an enemy.

[Lily Mae]

Painful and with such beauty. Your words pour from your heart and soul with such grace. I have missed reading you my friend..xoxo

[Poppie Mira]

beautiful!!

[Dream Weaver]

And thus: love at first sight eventually withers into unrealistic
perception at first glace...love it Neva xoxo

[mandy]

when one gives more feeling to an encounter than the other, we find out that we don't stir the same feelings in them....disapointment....then, just think,,,their loss.

[Pax]

the twist in the end was great...this is really a beautiful write...

[nishalization]

differently depicted...
some words could be felt very deep.
good work

[Cerise]

wooow..a wonderful write..loved the way you have expressed it soo beautifully..