When She Writes About the Rain

There is a massive distance
between her smile and tears
when she writes about the rain.
Because her faded dreams
put her mind at ease
behind the places
where she stands
in pain.

Sitting in the garden
where one finds love
in those eyes
that speak of alone.
She writes lines
which intrigue mysteriously.
You can see her words dance
where she's walked,
when dawn breaks
across the trees.

The inner deepness of her words
hold on to each cloud,
crying out to the depths
of our bones.  
They tell us our worst hours
contain the time outside
of her faded dreams
and that they too.....
will soon be gone.

When she writes about the rain
we smile
behind the places
where we stood in pain.  
You can see her words dance
where she's walked,
knowing......
they never speak
in vain.

Author's Note

Artist *Anna Zero

Reviews

[quinfinn]

you know, Neva, every time i read something you have written about my favorite subject (love) it is as if an angel were sitting at my side telling me how to infuse your words into my being, and it always come to me naturally how to feel deep inside . i've heard of horse whisperers, dog whisperers etc. BUT......you are definitely the love whisperer ! your art is amazing and almost perfection. thank you for sharing this with me

[April Child]

When she writes about the rain
we smile
behind the places
where we stood in pain

It passes eventually but while we are in it, ugh. Wonderful piece. I was touched by your lines.

[Ironbutt]

A perfect blend, Anna Zero should see how you combined the two for this well penned poem.

[Layla J Omorose]

Neva first off the picture once again is beautifully and captures the essence of the poem. This is going into my favorite list. I love this poem. It is beautifully written and expressed. Great job

[KAREN]

SOOOOOO BEAUTIFUL! Your pen is always overflowing with such beauty, I'm in awe with your work!!!
100/100

[Boldpen]

This write had an heavenly thing about it... so mysterious that I am out of words to describe it. but believe me, i enjoyed it through my heart. The way it went in beautiful flow and solid art... Hats off, my friend.

[Zachary_James]

You did it again, neva this is stunning.

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

I simply can't get enough of your words and the way you write. You always know how to bring such deep emotions to your words and it strikes any readers heart... and I keep running out of things to describe the emotions you convey through your poetry. Your work gets more and more beautiful everytime.

[TheLastEclipse]

That was grand. You are definitely at your prime. Stay on top of this. Goodness. Perfect ambiance and description. I must learn from you.