this oozes of trust...it wrings throughout the piece.
she trusts the artist, the man, to paint her as he sees fit. But the suggestion is that he will paint her with respect and love, and display the paintings with the pride that she and he are one.
i like this
jacob
Posted 12 Years Ago
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Loved it too Neva,
An older and different one, but still
The touch of you dear sis.
I feel the beauty of being
discovered by the world, and
Let yourself free, and go,
And it's a huge meaning of trust
Into the hands of someone else.
Different style for you, crafted very well. Maybe because I'm not female, but the poem made me feel a little uneasy... does she really mean it? heh
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
another old one Mark. I wrote that for a specific person who I felt was molding me into the woman t.. read moreanother old one Mark. I wrote that for a specific person who I felt was molding me into the woman they wanted me to be and was ok with it at the time. Still uneasy?
12 Years Ago
It's the write not you dear. I am not at the least bit uneasy with you. The poem reminds me of a few.. read moreIt's the write not you dear. I am not at the least bit uneasy with you. The poem reminds me of a few women in my past is all. :)
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