Stranger

I feel myself

fading.

Day by day,

an old face appears and

I no longer see myself in the mirror.

I see a familiar soul,

one stuffed into the deepest crevice within me.

I am now slipping into that crevice

while I see my face, her face

grinning at me.

Reviews

[Ricky Campbell]

Wow… this is great! Paints a very vivid picture into the readers mind. This is great!

[andrew mitchell]

wow great stuff I had to read this poem a few times only because i enjoyed the poem that much and was drawn to it. fantastic!

[Jamestown]

Wow! Very descriptive, we all go through this feeling unfortunately!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Chameleon]

Thank you for reviewing