She and I
A Poem by
Blackbird
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She digs holes and I make shovels.
© 2023 Blackbird
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Wow, I see much, Dear, the versetality bewtween holes and shovels, great scenario, explicit, dry, and ill-humored, great write! ---Maynard
Posted 2 Weeks Ago
Wonder if your words would have been put differently had you done the other's work? Hope not, it rings quite a loud bell.
Posted 6 Months Ago
Wonder if your words would have been put differently had you done the other's work? Hope not, it rings quite a loud bell.
this gives symbiotic relationship vibes.
can be beautiful. can be toxic.
{really loved this mini poem.}
Posted 1 Year Ago
this gives symbiotic relationship vibes.
can be beautiful. can be toxic.
{really loved this mini poem.}
Ha ha ha. Thoughtful llines.i am thinking friend. Good writing
Posted 1 Year Ago
Ha ha ha. Thoughtful llines.i am thinking friend. Good writing
How much of a story this tells...Very crazy what ones thoughts wander too blackbird...Great read
Posted 1 Year Ago
How much of a story this tells...Very crazy what ones thoughts wander too blackbird...Great read
Wow, very interesting read, enjoyed
Posted 1 Year Ago
Wow, very interesting read, enjoyed
A most interesting thought that tells the whole about the relationship,
Posted 1 Year Ago
A most interesting thought that tells the whole about the relationship,
Interesting. This can be read in many ways. I wondered whether you were working together or apart. If you stop making shovels, then she wouldn’t dig holes, perhaps?
Chris
Posted 1 Year Ago
Interesting. This can be read in many ways. I wondered whether you were working together or apart. If you stop making shovels, then she wouldn’t dig holes, perhaps?
Chris
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Added on December 4, 2023
Last Updated on December 6, 2023
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Blackbird Canada
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They say to write what you know, so I guess I won't be saying all that much.
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