She and I

She and I

A Poem by Blackbird
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She digs holes and I make shovels.

© 2023 Blackbird


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Wow, I see much, Dear, the versetality bewtween holes and shovels, great scenario, explicit, dry, and ill-humored, great write! ---Maynard

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Wonder if your words would have been put differently had you done the other's work? Hope not, it rings quite a loud bell.

Posted 6 Months Ago


this gives symbiotic relationship vibes.
can be beautiful. can be toxic.
{really loved this mini poem.}

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ha ha ha. Thoughtful llines.i am thinking friend. Good writing

Posted 1 Year Ago


How much of a story this tells...Very crazy what ones thoughts wander too blackbird...Great read

Posted 1 Year Ago


Wow, very interesting read, enjoyed

Posted 1 Year Ago


A most interesting thought that tells the whole about the relationship,

Posted 1 Year Ago


Interesting. This can be read in many ways. I wondered whether you were working together or apart. If you stop making shovels, then she wouldn’t dig holes, perhaps?

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago



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Added on December 4, 2023
Last Updated on December 6, 2023

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