Well presented, Charlotte. You must be writing of Satan -- or a politician of similar nature. I could name a few. The daily news is full of forked-tongue rogues. Your unrhymed verses flow with simple elegance, and the narrative undisrupted. This posting could stand for Chapter 1 of a grand saga. Your story captures the rambling rhetoric of self-serving propagandists, who speak in a dialectic that redefines the words to mean the opposite people hear. Only the dumbest fail to read the eely treachery behind the verisimilitude. Good work.
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This poem was prompted by one person in particular, but as with most characterisations, it can apply.. read moreThis poem was prompted by one person in particular, but as with most characterisations, it can apply to a large number of people. Treachery is as old as humanity itself, and the twin-sided rhetoric of such people as you mentioned is often difficult unless one sees both sides.
The poem could, indeed, be part of a longer series, but it seems best to leave it open-ended, as life often is.
Well presented, Charlotte. You must be writing of Satan -- or a politician of similar nature. I could name a few. The daily news is full of forked-tongue rogues. Your unrhymed verses flow with simple elegance, and the narrative undisrupted. This posting could stand for Chapter 1 of a grand saga. Your story captures the rambling rhetoric of self-serving propagandists, who speak in a dialectic that redefines the words to mean the opposite people hear. Only the dumbest fail to read the eely treachery behind the verisimilitude. Good work.
Posted 5 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
5 Years Ago
This poem was prompted by one person in particular, but as with most characterisations, it can apply.. read moreThis poem was prompted by one person in particular, but as with most characterisations, it can apply to a large number of people. Treachery is as old as humanity itself, and the twin-sided rhetoric of such people as you mentioned is often difficult unless one sees both sides.
The poem could, indeed, be part of a longer series, but it seems best to leave it open-ended, as life often is.
Charlotte Wensleydale was born in 1779. Details of her early life are unknown.
Her first collection of poetry, "Ruminations upon Several Occasions" was published in London in 1793 at the age of 14.. more..