Air

I breathed in air.
Only to find myself choking on it.

I tried to expel it out.
But it sank even further in.

Author's Note

I was going to make it longer, but this seemed.... simple - to the point.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Bad air is hard release. You made your point in the poetry. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[T.S. Sky]

Great work. This makes me feel as if the writer is feeling out of place and sad about it.

[andrew mitchell]

nice work, i prefer much to replace even in the last line. simple but sweet.

[Sammie Sanchez]

GO SEE A DOCTOR!!!!!, jkjk anyways nice piecec:

[Tony Jordan]

I guess, whether we like it or not, some things will affect us deeply, if we even take precautions. Like love. We can try to keep it out but...

I was not sure of this until the third or fourth reading. After a few deep breaths ...lol

[B]

Beware of the company you keep
Not only dirt can pollute the air

its when you can't breathe in
you know someone rotten is around

really well done !!!