Stress

I hear your words dripping off your tongue.
Stealing my thoughts and shutting them down.
All I want is for you to leave.
So I can stop feeling this grieve.

Author's Note

A quick anxiety relief poem

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Honest and direct words shared my friend. You did well. Nice flow of thoughts led to strong ending. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[T.S. Sky]

Simply written and with much emotion.

[barleygirl]

I can visualize this running thru a person's head when feeling stressed out, but not wanting to say it outloud . . . capturing it in a poem is a creative stress-relief! I don't believe rhymes have to be exact, so maybe "grief" as the last word would lend more to the meaning, while still maintaining a near-rhyme?!?!? Just a thought . . .

[Tony Jordan]

I'm not to keen on how the final word has been employed in it's present form Centipedle - it kind of trips me up.
Overall though, it's a great wee scream of a poem. I hope it helped.