Little update on my stories and poetry!

I need you! To stop some wildfires. Anyway please Read.

Alrighty so I know I had a lot of plans for new stories and the like but I changed it around xD Since I want to self publish at least one of these books as an Ebook which I found out what I need to do! So with some of these projects I really am looking for some hard core critique. Tell me what I did horribly in tell me what I did good in and what I can improve on! Link me to some exercises. Anyway here's what I'm doing

Red Water - still plan on writing this
Rain Kissed My Lips - Gay romance
Lock It - I always enjoyed my story line for this it just needs some clean up. It's a mystery suspense thing.
Poetry of course, but I'm wondering if it would do well if I compiled some into a novel and tried to sell it?
Under the Bridge - this will be my first attempt at a horror/suspense novel I think


I'll post up previews for all of them for you to read and get the basic idea. And I'll be going through my RR's today to catch up on that and give back to all the wonderful people who've helped me and supported me! Have a great day!

Author's Note

Need to get my writing commissions done as well. Bleh.