Let's pretend

Blooming red leaves,

Over a brightly colored town.

I remember it like yesterday,

Orange coating the streets.

There were people playing music,

Passing out food.

A festival of autumn,

Fondly within my mind.

Branches free of leaves,

Over a white colored town.

I remember it like today,

Crystals in the streets.

People were bundled up,

Making soup for all around.

A festival of winter,

Where I met you.

Author's Note

Sorry I haven't been on, life's gotten busy. I've been searching for a job and working on my mental health I suppose.

Reviews

[Shabeeh Haider]

Beautifully structured. I like the contrast between the two stanzas. The brightly colored town and then the white town in the second stanza.
It is a festival all around.

[AliciaB]

I really like the parallel structure between the first and second stanzas. The color imagery is beautiful, as are the descriptions of the townspeople. This is a very sweet, happy poem. It made me smile. Nicely done!

[Inject Positivity]

Such beautiful work frnd, I must say some lines that you have used here are superb giving a feeling of a festival occurring in that moment... There is a touch of sweetness in it with heartfelt memories... Loved it...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[Alex Carter]

I like it! It speaks of fun and happy occasions, combined with a possible meeting with someone you love. The simplicity and depth are amazing. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of words. The words dance with positive energy and took the reader to better places. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote