My love

She is perfection

Her name was perfection.

In all its form.

No matter what others saw.

My opinion was no different.

Her name was pain.

Whenever I couldn't bear.

I supported all I could.

So that her pain would fade.

Her name was society.

My society is was.

I couldn't bear to be apart.

I stayed no matter what.

Her name is love.

Love is pure.

Love is Pain.

Love is a challenge.

And her name is mine.

Author's Note

Hey look, I wrote a romantic poem once in a blue moon. Was inspired by my fiance. We've been together for almost 7 years now.

Reviews

[AliciaB]

Very cool! I like the strikethroughs and the underlined "mine" at the end - unique and interesting, and they provide nice emphasis on the words. The use of the ideas of "perfection," "pain," "society," and "love" all together is also intriguing. I really like the lines "Love is pure. / Love is Pain. / Love is a challenge." Nice work!

[LastMonth]

You're getting better with every poem, it seems.
Keep up the good work. A nice romantic piece.

[Nisreen]

That's a pretty sweet one :)