For You

For a prompt in the Inspiration Think Tank group

Evil was born from my womb

I birthed it into the world

For you…

 

Fear was suckled from my breast

An enrichment for the being

Of you...

 

Hunger was made from my madness

Imposed starvation to feel the emptiness

For you...

 

Strife I bled out of my heart

A warm blanket of comfort

For you…

 

Wrath spewed forth from my bowels

A divine power of rage

For you…

 

Sickness I belched from my insides

To heal the ugly wellness

Of  you…

 

I gave you my all

My protection, my defenses

For you

To take on the world

 

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

God you are preparing for evil birth ,and nourish,and defend it ...
Wrath spew forth from my bowels
A divine power of rage
For you�
you give him all your protection ,defenses to take over the world
My God this is really scary ,is this to happen soon,we better take care and prepair for the worse,very strong fearful writing dear Cat,tell me when this is close to happen...

[michael]

This one pulled at my heart and tore at my gut .... a great
piece of work.

[Tony]

Wow! this is much better poetry than the one I just read, no offense intended....
Dark isn't the word I'm feeling here....
More like EvilSpawn.
good job!

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

wow CC this is dark and so powerful .. makes me think Rosemarys Baby lol
this is a very good poem , one of the best i have read in a few!
Chloe
xoxo

missed you!

[run vs remember]

Whoa! Was this for the fear prompt however long ago that was? I'm surprised I haven't read it before now. I love this, one of my favorites of yours. It pulled me in from the beginning and didn't loosen its grip until the end. Very, very sweet.

[Blackbirdsong]

This describes a true mother quite well since they will suffer for their child. To give your child the tools they'll need to succeed and be strong is a painful journey for a mother. It's so easy to want to hold your child close, but they'll never learn strength that way. Excellent write. Really nothing I am saying here is equal to your writing so I'll stop now :)

[Crazy Cat Man]

Ohhhhh very dark indeed.....I like

[Freder Fredersen (aka G..]

Bursting with dark emotion. A righteous anger is riding on these black waves of twisted statement and horrid truth. Well done!
FF

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Still scary. lol

[just is]

This is such a wonderful write here, I really enjoyed this, I can feel emotion in this, well written.

[Sheila Kline]

For you..........all that can be given, taken, infused, birthed, empowered within these words....very descriptive, and knee shaking, teeth rattling kind of writing!
Well done.......Sheila