Angelic Moon

Pour from your chalice the colors of the rainbow
As dreamers nestle in their beds
Her light will remind you

Listen to the night creatures praise her
As she hangs among stars
And reminds us of our own cycle

Reviews

[Clockwork]

This is more hopeful for sure. I like the image of pouring the colors of the rainbow from the chalice. I feel like the subject matter from this poem is the stuff of a lucid dream. It is quite vivid and promising. It brought me joy to immerse myself in the colors of your dream.

[InsanityWriter]

Beautifully written. :) Excellent piece, I love the imagery.

[Tex]

Very nice imagery, very nice write. I very much enjoyed this. I too am trying, trying, trying to write positive stuff.

they is simply nothing lacking in this piece.

Thank you for a great write!

100/100 from me!

[Writer *78*]

Impressive Work once again.

-Writer *78*

[Rob Santana]

wow you really have a way with words..Strong imagery

[zainul]

Wonderful write
Love the concise yet magical words for the fabulous moon.
Congrats!!!
100/100