Mausoleum Man

I'll be posting all of poems tonight. They're all poems that I've posted on Allpoetry.

As I sit here in this marble cell,
my skin is being eaten away by time
I am the house of thoraxes and sheer rotting meat
the lack of sincere life source
is turning me into soil and dust
To the mass' formalities,
I belong in this Reaper domain
I want to be a wind gust creature
but my heart lacks the red necessity
Animation and oxygen is alien to this fleshly capsule
However, we'll all be fleshly capsules
in the aftermath of the main cycle

Reviews

[dexterous sam]

something it is good to read a matter which is not a part of league ,which can be easily distinguished from others ...everyone stand in this matter and everyone die in this matter the only thing that matters is how you live your life either for yourself or for others....otherwise well done i hope i can read more of you..

[Cody]

Thank you, my good sir.

[Ana B.]

hmmm, this one makes one pause and ponder over the right questions. Lovely write :)

[Sami Khalil]

You delve brilliantly into the known and unknowns of death and the fear and anxieties befalling humans when hearing of. Excellent...:)...........

[terry smith]

everything dies...and who is to say this is the main cycle....I love the red necessity line!!

[Jacquelene Vanessa More..]

brilliant! I adore your harsh and vivid imagery it paints such a brilliant work.

[A. Kim Spradling]

Wow! Told from the dead perspective. I like your style! I have to chuckle, but please do not think in a bad way. I love the turn you took on this piece. I have a daughter who would love this piece as I do! There are actually several ways to look at this piece!

[Sultrysoul]

Beautifully described. A very good piece indeed. I really like the imagery.

[Nightfeather]

This poem is really epic and makes one think hard about the concept 'dying'. Many humans fear dead but some accept them but in the end. We cannot now for 100% what we exactly fear or accept. For 'dead' is just a concept, invented by us humans to describe the unknown. There are thousands of different interpretations of 'dying' and I like the way you describe 'dead'. This poem lacks no talent, metaphor or epicness.

Good job :D

[Cody]

Probably my fave review on this poem.

[Nightfeather]

Thank you. I feel like an epic reviewer thanks to your comment :D

[Benson Osuji]

great poem loved it very much Cody

[Samaira]

You have used to right words to paint the picture. This is good.