The Cross of Yin and Yang

This is a poem I wrote on August 5th and decided to post it on here.

I am the land judge of sin
Contradiction is a suicide bomber
Both are birthed from the moth to the flame
Sit down for a lesson
and learn that your heart
is on a tangent illness
Sexuality is an ENTITY
Parasite is the keyword
It takes over your life
until it is your life
Never place a halo around the Devil's horns
Don't even try to envision
that the snake is the lamb
Do I just have this entitlement
because I was blown away
when I first stepped foot
into your world of sadomasochism
Only the Father
can take away the question mark

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

You have said a lot in the poem. The statement open the door to conversation with no proper answer. Sin, sex and the Devil. Three places with more open doors than close. I enjoyed the poem. The ending was a open ending. left the reader to find his answer. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Cody]

Thank you. I'm glad you actually understood it. My mother didn't. lol

[Coyote Poetry]

Words are tricky. Can be different meaning from where you are standing and you are welcome.

[Cody]

Well, there are a couple of things that are on here that most people won't understand because some lines are incredibly person. You probably wouldn't have guess that this is both about religious segments and me having a painful affectionate feelings for a girl. For some reason now a days, religion gets involved with my disturbing crushes.

[Coyote Poetry]

Hard to combine need of love and religion. I tell people. Sex come later. Dance, sing and have fun. Better to built a solid house of love than use and abuse the things we hold precious.

[Girl With A Pen]

I am completely blown away by this poem!

[Nightfeather]

This poem goes very deep. It connects with abstract concepts like : Religion and Love. These two concepts are connected to each other both sometimes they become so entwined that they collide and conflict with each other. Love is both the friend and the enemy of religion, because most religious people are not so happy about the concept of 'making love' with someone. A friend of mine has had a difficult relationship because the father of his girlfriend was so fixed on that, sex for marriage equals being tricked by the devil,etc. I think that 'making love' is one of the most beautiful concepts ever invented. I really like your poem and I hope that I understood the core of your poem. You can correct me if I am wrong but I really like this poem. Very well written.

Good job :D

[Cody]

Damn.. Best comment I've gotten by far on this poem.

[Nightfeather]

Thank you :)

[Eternal Devotion]

Made my day so much emotion in so few words x

[Cody]

Why thank you, beautiful.

[_nymphofthecross_]

This poem is like acupuncture. Every line pricks in a place that one forgot one needed healing. I'm not sure it heals, but it certainly reopens old wounds. Very sharp, very good. Much gratitude

[Cody]

Thank you and I know nymphs are real, my child.

[quarintine_deathangel]

The standpoint is a direct question with the demanding realization and it hurts, every last bit of that is a slight shock. Displaying the exact emotional state you were in when inking this. Nice job! The interwoven personal connection is good to. I like it, I agree with Coyote Poetry, definitely.

[Cody]

Thank you very much.

[quarintine_deathangel]

You're welcome!

[Paradox]

I agree with Coyote in that this is MUCH that is said in the poem and no answers. Thought provoking for sure!

[Kayla-Vi Hopkins]

Very well written, and unique. Everyone loves a new aspect to something so well known :) bravo!

[Cody]

Thank you very much!

[butt muncher]

"Parasite is the keyword
It takes over your life
until it is your life"

i seriously loved that part

[Cody]

Thank you very much, doll.

[Amy R]

i had to read this a few times before i understand everything you were saying, and i agree to Coyote! :)
this was indeed a piece to write!
good job!

[Cody]

Thank you very much

[Amy R]

ur welcome.