Love?

Unfinished? poem I found in an old document ^^;

A kiss, a kiss upon the lips 

A silver tongue that slips between 

Gentle embrace, held by the hips 

Lustful intent hidden behind 

A loving gaze and clever mind 

Reviews

[The River Man]

I enjoyed this piece quite a bit.
I find its compact nature assists in the efficient and clear conveyance of the message, which is one of primal desire; something that is common amongst almost all humans. Your language flows very nice, very neat.

Well done.

[Mae ~]

I appreciate your review, as well as your understanding.

[Hatchling]

I love how this poem flows. Great work