The Internal Conflict

I have to admit..I am no Pro.And this is something I wrote about something I was going through..So this is super personal.I'm a wee bit nervous about sharing things but here I am being Courageous!!

Strongest of all
Mighty Soldier.
Been through a fall,
Made her stronger.

They spoke ill of him,
So She'd feel better.
"His soul is dim,
I wish He never met her." 

She sat there fighting,
All her battles.
All by herself,
with guitars and rattles.

It's not the battles,
that broke her soul.
It was WAR,
That stole her show.

The world watched her crumble,
They did the best they could.
But all they did was mumble,
And that didn't do her good.

Everyone knew her plight,
But No one knew her fight.
The war that killed our soldier,
was the war she fought with herself.

Reviews

[Ryan Henderson]

Great poem! I loved thw word choice you had as well as the flow of the piece. It had a sort of rythm to it that drew me in. This poem has a mood of strive and depression, but it's not dark. This is a very fine line that a lot of people fall short of or cross over, you on the other hand did it just 'write' *chuckles at cheesy joke* great job! :D

[Sandra Nair]

I would be very happy if you could inform me once you write these kinda poems. Really a good one

[Celestia Benita Singh]

Definitely

[Sandra Nair]

A good poem.You've got talent. It's really heart-rendering!!!

[Celestia Benita Singh]

Thank You :)

[Pragya Vishnoi]

A sad and deep poem.Good one.

[Celestia Benita Singh]

Thank You :)

[Rewel Acosta Rivera]

This poem is really true. The worse war is fight against our self. I love your style as poet.
Keep on faith on yourself. I will be following you.

[Celestia Benita Singh]

Thank you :)

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

So beautiful and yet so sad.


well I must confess when I saw
my name it is what drew me in :)



Thank you for sharing.


God bless. Benita

[Celestia Benita Singh]

Haha..Thanks :)

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're quite welcome.

[Earl Meek]

The pain that's lost behind perception. Wonderfully stirring work

[Celestia Benita Singh]

Thank you very much

[Cindy Marietta]

I really liked this! You can definitely feel the emotion behind this, and the last two lines are fantastic. Keep it up!

[Celestia Benita Singh]

Thank You. I love the way you write! :)