Forbidden fruit

He saw me

Lingering in a tree

And tugged away

Without further resistance

Caught me

Snag, Pull

 

Wrapped in a cocoon

Of his hands

I thought I were safe

 

With pacific fingers

He began

To peel away at

My delicate soft covering

I had no clue

That he sought to annihilate me

 

The juices inside

Ran lush

He knew what he was doing

 

He brought me to his lips

Without explanation

Or cause

He felt entitled

So permitted himself to

Bite into me

 

Excruciating pain

Insides pouring out

Lush, Rich

Divine

I dripped off his chin

 

Like silent tears

From cheeks

 

Reviews

[JelliFyshKissUs]

Woo... hot momma.... peeling the innocence covering the sin and devouring the sweet soul whole. In this I swear I see you evolving before our eyes. The smooth flow, the flawless wording.

He thought he were entitled
So permitted himself to
Bite into me

Such sensual phrasing in something so devastating. Bravo, my dear.

[.......]

This is a pondering and interesting piece here.
Like this write, you have intrigued me.

[Liza]

hmmmmm, interesting. the fruit thinks and feels :) - I enjoyed this because though it seems alluring to a woman to be picked up and desired; the way the man obtained it was by pulling her, yanking her, having absolutely no sensitivity just hunger and self serving satitsfaction to please himself - and the behavior just indicates that he just sees her as that fruit, bite her, sink his teeth, chew her out and throw away....those silent tear from her cheeks are from a bursted spirit that thought it was love....only change i would make is in the pretenses...

"He thought he were entitled" - to perhaps - he thought he was entitled or he felt entitled or something along those lines :)