Forbidden fruit

He saw me

Lingering in a tree

And tugged away

Without further resistance

Caught me

Snag, Pull

 

Wrapped in a cocoon

Of his hands

I thought I were safe

 

With pacific fingers

He began

To peel away at

My delicate soft covering

I had no clue

That he sought to annihilate me

 

The juices inside

Ran lush

He knew what he was doing

 

He brought me to his lips

Without explanation

Or cause

He felt entitled

So permitted himself to

Bite into me

 

Excruciating pain

Insides pouring out

Lush, Rich

Divine

I dripped off his chin

 

Like silent tears

From cheeks

 

Reviews

[Praiser]

Forbidden wow

[Emily Feret]

[eldogg870]

i love it

[Dream Weaver]

What can I say but a magnificent piece of
sensuous poetic s....

[SpokenWord]

In the moment we are lost without context of the future. In hind sight we look back with new wisdom which brings regret. It is comparing apples to oranges for the moment isn't the present and present holds the wisdom not the moment. If we view a moment without viewing its past or future then we would smile for we felt passion and it filled us. Only when we put it context of the whole do we tarnish it with knowledge that we didn't have when the moment occurred. People do horrible things to each other, men use women for carnal lust satisfaction, but in the moment do not both enjoy it calling Gods name in sin. Consequences, consequences consequences we can't get away from them but we can endure and remember the moment for what it was. A moment of weakness, a memory of bliss.

[Robin]

swimming the psyche , choreographed calligraphy dripping in emotion ..

[Everett DeValle]

Wow, you flow so lovely....awesome poetry.

[OT]

oh wow, so stark and powerful - I loved the "pacific fingers" - it stood out to me - no idea why haha - so many brilliant lines - powerful write indeed!!

[Zöe Selemane-Kiang..]

:O. Its just :O!!!! Its so good. Wow!

Zöe

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

you've drawn a stunning dual texture to the point where the liquids burst in sensate emotional array from the piece into the reader's soul~