My Emo Poem

1/2 Emo poem, 1/2 parody.

Drowned,

burned,

you.

You b*****d

there is nothing left of me now.

Drifting away. Ashes, dissolving into the uncaring sea

you’ve thrown me into.

I am a sea of pain

silent agony as you leave me

turning away and passing out of sight beyond the sand dunes

your image forever burned into my mind’s eye

blinding me.

And then I remember.

This isn’t the first time.

I wonder how I came back together after the last man

and that’s when I realize

my analogy really isn’t that good.

To my disappointment, life has a pleasant surprise waiting. I will just keep going. When I’m exhausted and can’t take any more, life won’t stop just because I feel it ought to. Eventually, whether I say yea or nay, I will forget. My friends will come over and I will cut the birthday cake, and another year will go by.

And this moment will fade.

D****t

I was feeling so poetic.

The truth is, my demise is still about sixty years away. Golly, that’s a bloody long time.

Maybe even long enough for me to get over and forget

you.

You b*****d.

What was your name again?

Author's Note

If you've got some good over-the-top imagery ideas, I'll gladly try to incorporate them.

Reviews

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very dark!!! I like this write alot. thought it was amazing!

[hopelove]

wow so dark i love it