Broken hearted

The one I love broke my heart

Broken hearted

 

Why did you leave me with a broken heart?

Honey why did you left my soul crying.

Where did I make the mistake?

‘Cause I can’t figure it out.

 

I can’t forget what you said.

It’s like a disease in my mind.

Your words when you left me alone.

Is burning me up from the inside.

 

But yet I don’t blame you, for anything.

In fact I blame myself.

You were the strong one of us.

And I was the weak little girl.

 

And still  I’m feeling so lonesome.

Author's Note

Love stinks...

Reviews

[cfix]

Powerfully written and very emotional,
Very well written.

[Bloody Ceca]

Thanks for reading my poem :) and yes there is some fail's but I work on getting better Grammatical ^^

[Elle B. T.]

Love can suck sometimes. This is beautifully written, but here are some things I found.
1st stanza, 2nd line "left" should be "leave." 2nd stanza, last line "is" should be "are."
I like how the last line sums it all up with that word "lonesome." It really makes the melancholy of the poem set in. Good job!