Song Thing

It might seem crazy what I'm about to say,

I know I got a bad reputation,

I'm thinking out loud,

It's something unpredictable, but in the end it's right

I'm always tomorrow-bound

Aimed for the stars and I shouldn't have missed,

Work a little harder, work another way,

There are those who think that life has nothing left to chance

We see you like I hoped we never would

Through all the good things and all the hardship

Pour a little salt, we were never here

We'll be home soon, so dry your eyes

Reviews

[KeybladeMaster]

9.5/10. I didn't think you ended very well.

[Zachary]

I enjoy that the entire first stanza of this poem just tells the reader that you're going to say something weird.

[lettuce]

good stuff ~

[Colin Miller]

This poem really touched my heart, when you said "I'm always tomorrow-bound" i really related because im always looking forward!!!!!!!!!!! :D