(Not decided but for now): Betrayal

(Not decided but for now): Betrayal

A Story by Catrice
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Eevee's my favorite pokemon and i decided to use her in this creepy little story. If you even play just picture replace eevee's name with your favorite pokemon.

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I'm sitting on a crowded bus impatiently trying to get through the used Soul Silver I was forced to buy when my little sister decided it would be a good idea to replay over my Pokémon game. After fiddling around with it so she could save her file, my file became corrupt and the game wouldn't even work anymore. To further angst me, Mom said I would have to just get a new one. My little sis, she always gets her way. The people around me just came from a nice hot day cardinal’s stadium. The nauseating smell of beer, funk, and greasy nachos suffocated me to no end. To escape the cardnals fans disappointed chatter I plunged myself into my game. After weeks worth of work I was finally caught up to where I was in my game. I was fighting against the Elite Four and was nearing the battle with Lance. In my mind, Lance and I were going at it. My Pokémon were on a pretty low level, my strongest was 53, but I love a challenge and I was giving it everything I had. Unfortunately for me Lance was merciless. I lost and was sent to the beginning. Pride hurt but Pokémon healed I looked for somewhere to train. I decided to take the back route from my home town. After playing for so long I started to get a headache, so I saved in the forest and closed the game to play later. The bus just reached my stop and I was happy to jump off leaving the stinky smell of people behind.

 

After talking to mom and fighting my little sister (another argument!)I went to rest in my room I plugged my DSi up and got under the covers. I opened my DSi and started to train in the forest by Victory Road. It was so routine....my eyes closed just for a minute. I opened them and I noticed I was standing next to a new entrance. I walked through the entrance assuming I had just found something rare in the game. I walked through the short cave and when I came out on the other side I was in a darker forest. I sat up and began to explore this area. Maybe this is where I find Celeby? Instead my character stops and an Eevee runs up to it. Eevee looked worried and panicked. She cried at my spite, seeming to ask it for help. Then she looked behind her, cried out and then hid behind my character. A sprite looking like a brute comes up to my sprite girl demanding I hand over the Eevee. Eevee shakes behind me with fear. The question bored pops up: yes/no?  "Heck no." I tell myself as I click on that response and get ready for a throw down. The brute spite replies, "You don't understand! I want that Pokémon! I have to kill it!" What? Kill?!? This guys going down. I choose the "no" response again. The brute roars and challenges me to a battle for it. The brute character had 3 Pokémon to my 5. (Wait 5? I was sure I had a full house...) I battled him. His 3 Pokémon were a Pinser taken out by my Pidgot, a Cawdaught taken out by my Amphrous, and a Gliscor taken out by my Vaporieon. After defeating him I didn't even win any prize money. The brute character got impatient but his pokes were gone so what could he do? The little guys’ window came up.

"..."

"....fine."

"Keep the Pokémon." He started to walk off my screen and I was feeling quite proud of myself until he turned around just before he left and said,

"But...your gonna be sorry."

"Hahaha!"

"Yeah you deserve all your gonna get!" Then he rushed off my screen. My sprit turns to the grateful Eevee who seems so happy with what I had just done. The window popped up.

"Have Eevee join your party?"

Why not? More Eevee's to me the better. It's my favorite Pokémon after all! I clicked on the "yes" response and watched Eevee bounce up and down with joy. Good thing I had a spot open for it. After all that happened, the game returned me to my home in the game. I was surrounded by the professor and his associates, my mom and my rival’s mom. I had just finished telling them Eevee's story and they were commending me for my bravery and how happy they were that little Eevee wasn't hurt. Then I was sent back up to my room with the Eevee and had a chance to nickname it and check its stats. It was a Naughty nature and was on level 20 like the Eevee from Bill. I saw nothing wrong with this Pokémon, why would someone wanna kill it? I didn't want to think about it anymore. I choose to save it there and go to sleep. I was quite tired after that drama bit. I closed the game and fell into an uneasy sleep.

 

In my dream, the Eevee rescue played its self out again in my dreams. I beat the brute and he made his empty threats. The scene haunted me till I awoke in the twilight hours. Not being able to sleep I opened the game up. And noticed my character was in bed with the Eevee. Funny, I didn't remember doing that. The screen then blacked out. When the screen came to the room had changed. It took me a minute but then I realized. Strange, the room looked like my room. I closed the game and took some deep breaths I had to be dreaming or something. Suddenly, I hear a noise of something falling down stairs. Figuring it was my little sister; I got up lazily and walked to the door. As I opened the door to my room I looked out I nearly fell down the stairs. That was weird because there was a hall with 2 other rooms before, now here was just stairs to downstairs. ...Just like in the game. I rushed to the DSi and opened it to see my pixie standing by her bed like me looking at something like a DS. I walked to my door and she copied my every step. I walked down the stairs and she did the same. What was going on? My house downstairs now looked exactly like the game. I walked to the front door and went outside. I was in New Bark town. I was sure except there was no one there. Not a soul. I decided to try Professor Elm's place. As I entered I said "Hello?" My DSi lit up. I looked to see my words on the game.

"Hello?" I took steps forward and saw something in the shadows. Against my better judgment I stepped closer. (Maybe I wasn't in control) The closer I got the more everything in me wanted to run away. Finally I was within arm’s length to touch it. I reached over, slowly and cautiously. I grabbed it and pulled it into the light. At first I saw something white, then red, then pink. Then it all came into focus. It was Professor Elm. Sick and scared I ran as fast as I could out the lab and threw up outside. I looked at my DSi noticing my character was doing the same. I thought about throwing it and breaking it for a moment and noticed a little brown thing walking by. It was my Eevee. It looked so cute walking by. I was filled with joy and relief that the she was safe. I called out to her.

"Eevee!"

She turned around and ran into my arms. She was shaking and was cold and wet. I shoved my DSi into my arm with her and ran to my "home" to get her a towel to dry the poor thing off. To finally hold one felt wonderful. In spite of my current situation I felt like a kid who finally got her wish, for Pokémon to be real. As I burst through the doors of my home, I bumped into someone. I fell back and saw a very bloody and messed up man. He reminded me of the guy from the forest. I checked my DSi and there he was, the Brute. I prepared for a battle but before I could say a word he fell to the ground before my feet. That was when I got to take a good look at my house...blood was all over the place.

 

I felt my knees start to shake; I got a very sick feeling in my gut. No one was alive in this town. That the only ones left alive here were me and...No way. My hand shaking I grab I DSi, I looked into the screen. The screen was black. All I saw was my reflection with Eevee on my shoulders. Her eyes were glowing red. Her teeth became sharp fangs that spread into an evil grin. I could only gaze in horror as she sunk her teeth into my neck. The pain was staggering as she began to pull and rip a chunk of flesh from my neck. As I fell to the ground in shock I felt nothing, nothing but fear as Eevee walked up to my face with a bloody toothy grin. I began to plea as her fangs aimed strait for my face.

 

I woke up with a start.

My heart was racing. My sheets were damp with sweat. My mom was standing over me. "Are you okay, hunny? You looked like you were having one hell of a nightmare. I had to wake you otherwise I thought you might hurt yourself."

I stared at my mom for a minute then gave her the biggest hug a child could give a mother. "I guess I was right. Why don't I cook you something to eat for breakfast?"

"That would be great." I replied.

"Well get up and get dressed and I'll see you downstairs." I rushed to the door and peeked down a hall with a bathroom door open on the right and closet on the left. Mom gave me a look. "Just checking somthin." I replied and walked back into my room to get dressed. I listen to my mom walk down the stairs before I look outside the window. Everything was back to normal. Except....my eyes turned to my closed and fully charged DSi. I walk over to it and open the game. It was at the part after I defeated the brute.

"Let Eevee join your party?"

I push down once and press A.

"Are you sure?"

I push A.

Eevee cries."Eevee seems sad..."

And she faded away....

This time I turned it off and take it out of my DS. I went downstairs and saw my old house and my old kitchen. My little sister walks in after me. "Here." I said as I gave her my Soul Silver. "You can have it." She squeals and runs into her room to get her DSLite. "See? I knew you two could share." Mom says while handing me my plate and left the kitchen.

I take a bite of eggs and watched as my little sister played began to play my game. I hear New Bark Town music play. Then my little sis frowns up. "Hey, what is this?!?!" "What do you mean?" "I'm telling Mom!" She throws down the game and runs. I look at the game. All my Pokémon from my party are lying on the ground with pixilated blood all over. Eevee with her glowing red eyes is standing on top of their corpses and all it says in big, bloody red letter across the screen:

Let Eevee join your party?

© 2011 Catrice


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