Grandiose

Grandiose

A Poem by Catrice

Bigger than big

Smarter than smart

Better than the best

Grander than most grand

I'm better than you little man.

Naive fool, your eyes are not worthy to lay on such a prize as me

Fool best git to steppin cause what you see i all from me

And all of me will never be yours

Can you afford gold, hunny?

Na-ah, this chocolate priceless

And to supirior for even a gods toung.

© 2011 Catrice


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this sentence is strange to me: Fool best git to steppin cause what you see i all from me

not entirely sure how it's supposed to read. plus get is spelled wrong. also, think you meant superior and tongue. also, last line should have too instead of to.

now, other than the fact i'm being a grammar nazi, not a bad piece. clearly you think highly of yourself, as you should

Posted 13 Years Ago


ha! misspelled some stuff. but you get the idea.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on March 18, 2011
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