Autumn Senses

Brown leaves, I watch

as they fall.

From Autumn's trees

or should I say Fall?

 

Your step, I hear

as you walk.

You come closer

for a kiss and talk.

 

Your hair, I touch

as it glistens.

Under the sun

I, to your voice listens.

 

Your breath, I taste

as we kiss.

Once you're gone

surely this will I miss.

Author's Note

The grammar mistakes are on purpose for the sake of Rhyming. Thank you for reading!

Reviews

[Antoñyo]

Love how you capture subtle moments in time.

You are a fan of these, I think...a true romantic.

Thanks for sharing

[Catlen]

I am a true romantic.... Thank you for reading!

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of words and thoughts. I like the places you took me in your words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Catlen]

Thank you!

[Inspiring Writer]

Lovely poem, it's a bit emotional in ending but very beautiful at starting. You've described all moments of Autumn or fall with some great clips of love. Nice comparison i've got through the poem of season and love of lovers. Nicely penned. Keep writing, Catlen :))))

[Tom]

Love blossoms with autumn's colourful arrival !

A fetching sensuous poem, so appropriate in the Autumn season !

[Catlen]

Thank you very much!

[Tom]

You are most welcome !

[Chris]

My mind did re-arrange in auto... and I kept bringing it back to your form. I liked the story you put into it.

[annabellee]

Really sweet poem, Catlen, I enjoyed reading it :)

[Relic's Bare Trees]

Third stanza is forced. Overall a good poem that tells a little story of love. The scenery can be felt and seen. Thanks for sharing.

[Catlen]

Thanks for reading!

[Relic's Bare Trees]

My pleasure.