A Ride To Last

Going for a ride on a motorcycle...

I climb you

You cheer.

I touch your hand

You come alive.

I step on your foot

You roar.

Another caress on your hand

You are ready.

 

We are off

Alone...Together...

We journey passionately

To a world of freedom

Of love...

 

I touch you a bit harder

You respond eagerly.

You roll faster...fast...faster

I feel you

You are alive under me.

 

Such rush...

Don't stop...

You can't stop...

 

Reviews

[Frieda P]

Clever double entendre in this read...enjoyed.

[Catlen]

Thank you for reading!

[Frieda P]

My pleasure!

[Vidya Bacchus]

this poem is lovely i am however assuming it is about the huge bike i see in your picture and not a person as it soundslol.I love it alot

[Catlen]

Yes, it is about a bike. :))))))))) Thanks for reading it!

[Inspiring Writer]

Haha, so, finally .. you've got the Ride .. :) Great to hear, Catlen. So, what' was the speed .. ? lol
as i told once .. i run with 200 KM/h .. (i meant, i run the bike with 200 km/h not me.. lol ) so, what was youse speed of bike .. ??? :)

[Catlen]

No, never got it! This is just a poem. Thanks for reading!

[Baban.A.A]

I trust the poem was just like speaking to something animated and alive, not an object. the motorbike was just like a an animal or bird with soul, you know I really liked the idea and was fresh to me. well done. great job

[Catlen]

Thanks for reading it. :)))

[zainul]

A senior once told me,"For enjoying safe ride,keep your bike under control.Don't let it control you."
Great write,Catherine!

[Chris]

You touched some memories with this one. On and off road ...the sheer feel of being joined and having the power.

[Hatchling]

Great write! I enjoyed reading it

[Catlen]

Thanks :))))))))

[Hatchling]

You're welcome

[emmajoy]

Wonderful intentions along with the double entendres. Like the mounting hysteria of this, quite short phrases, punctuation just enough, good phrasing, to say the least and presumably a superb arrival!

[Catlen]

Thank you Emma.

[Distantview123]

Good use of the 'double entendre' here! A well-written and entertaining write. ~ Robert.

[Catlen]

Thank you for reading!

[SyberRose]

Loved this...very creative indeed...enjoyed reading...Rose

[Catlen]

Thank you very much