Urge

Always keep your head up

The urge to close the door 

To hide inside my room 

Escape from the hollow roar 

Outside-consumed with gloom 

The urge to laugh and smile 

To overcome the aching abyss 

It works for a little while 

I crave these moments of bliss 

The urge to cry but no tears fall 

To release the floods inside 

As I drown in it all 

Still no tears are cried 

The urge to be something real 

To remove the nothing within 

Pain is all I can feel 

And it's all I've ever been

Author's Note

Please comment your thoughts, I now my vocabulary isn't great

Reviews

[Lenah Mehzabin]

These words just feel like written with honest emotions and so they run so smoothly like they are nothing but perfect ..each stanza just touched me deeply the way it was meant to , ..Gorgeous Work !

[Cassie Black]

Thanks you so much that means so much to me that you liked it

[Erika]

I feel as I can associate with this. Sometimes you just need "you" time for comfort and peace and to sort through all the confusion... but that may not always be the cure. This piece is very powerful to me and in itself, it displays many things that have ran through my mind thousands of times. Great piece. Keep writing! :)

[Cassie Black]

Thank you so much!