Ant, Bird, Existence

I am but an Ant.

Toiling in each moment,

Of everyday.

Living...

I am but a Bird.

Soaring effortlessly,

Unfettered and observing.

Life... Living...

I am but an Existence.

Gifted limited time to...

Experience life and live.

Reviews

[John the Baptist]

I think I see where you're going with this one, but if you would consider deleting the comma at the end of the second line of the last stanza, it would change the impact of the poem radically for the better.

[Cathexis]

Thank you for your advice. 😁