Prologue : Soundless

She looked so breathless, her features so finely sculpted. Yet, No words come from her mouth.

"It was as if everything was going to end right there.

With the rain pouring down at me while I trudged, I was fighting the ground that molded around my feet,

with each step draining all the life I had inside of me.

It looked so hopeless.

It looked as if I was going to die,

Since I felt so heavy,

and there was a light up ahead that I knew wasn't supposed to be there.

Since I was so dizzy,

and there were more rights that there were lefts.

I couldn't even see at all.

Everything was so murky, like soup.

Maybe I should have listened to the Weather-woman that had said it would rain here while she was on. 

Maybe I should have cared and waited til the next day. 

Then I wouldn't have to go through this.

But no,

If I didn't go now,

If I wasn't where I was right now,

If I wasn't suffering,

I knew I wouldn't have had the chance to meet her."

Author's Note

Thoughts?

Reviews

[Imara]

I can only say great job! The flow is amazing!

[Catheryn]

thanks ^^

[Carnation]

the last line adds to the suspense, cant wait to read the rest!

[Catheryn]

Please do!

[17thWhitePrince]

The prologue has indeed peaked my interest =D well done =P on to chapter one . . .

[Catheryn]

XD YAY!

[Tsukin Archangel]

:o I like lol, is the "I' in this male? I'm assuming since u said "her" but u never know it could be a female I totally not against that or it could just be a friend but anyway i'm rambling~

[Catheryn]

XD Lol. Yep. It's a guy.

[Tsukin Archangel]

lol okay, idk i thought it was a chick until the end

[Catheryn]

XD LOL. I was thinking someone would say that since the pic at the top is of a chick. XD

[Tsukin Archangel]

lol yeah that's probably what did it lol. PSST i have a slightly seemingly random question but, can u send read requests right now? My account doesnt seem to want to let me for some reason O_O

[Catheryn]

XD The Read Requests for the Chapters?
It won't let you read? XD

[Tsukin Archangel]

lol it won't let me send any on google chrome idk y....I had to switch to internet explorer ewwwww

[Catheryn]

Lol. It lets me XD

[Tsukin Archangel]

idk what's wrong with my shiz then lol

[Catheryn]

Lol XD

[Diasha]

:O!!!!
I LIKE ITTTT

[Catheryn]

Thanks 8D!

[Catheryn]

Read Moar? 8D

[Nicole~!]

(≧∇≦)/♩♪♫♬ ~

[Catheryn]

8D Yay!

[blegh]

love it. wants readers wanting more :)

[Catheryn]

That's good 8D!!

[Harriet Styles]

My writing is crap compared to this!!!!! :D You're so good!!

[Catheryn]

IT IS NOT CRAP! D8
DUN SAY THAT! I'm not that good ;w;
I JUST READ YOURS SO DUN SAY IT. D8

[Harriet Styles]

haha okay thanks lol :)

[Catheryn]

Yay 8D

[Paradigm]

Yeah, I just read both of your guys' writing and you both are definitely not bad! So don't say that! By the way, your story has captured me. I can't wait to watch it unfold!

[PokemonFan#1]

MEHH!!! I'm hooked! I must read more!!

[Catheryn]

Please Do!!! 8D

[Basu Gupta]

nicely written..especially the last and the ultimate line touched my heart.....do write more..

[Catheryn]

Thanks 8D The first chapter came, I encourage you to review that as well 8O

[Basu Gupta]

my pleasure..

[Catheryn]

Thank you.