The kiss

I was watching a commercial for a movie with James McAvoy. Can I just say Oh My God that man is so Handsome (and Hot!) haha Anyway, I saw the way he kissed the girl on the screen. To that I added what I wanted in a kiss and words. So here we have my finis

The Kiss

 

The kiss,
sweet,
tender,
filled with power,
emotion,
energy,
the warmth sent chills,
electricity,
feelings,
all storming down my back,
my tighs,
oh how I feel it,
it haunts my thoughts,
my dreams,
my many tortured hours,
the time I spend without you,
my pain of choice,
ah my sin,
my lust,
my passion,
my fear,
mine,
all mine,
no sweeter feeling on earth,
no worse feeling,
no greater dream,
none better than you,
your lips,
your touch,
your sweet voice,
ah the product of my idolitry,
I tremble,
the thought of you,
my comfort.

Reviews

[WayzWithWordz]

i love this one, i think the font you used made the poem even better, i've never seen that before, but it is very passionate and deep and the style is unique
on to the next one...

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This is very good! I love the structure and the font you used. It looks like something that could have come out of a diary! I thought the poem flowed well. I could feel the emotions in the words. Very good!