Life

This poem tells a story about a lot of people's life's and how love can make you feel.

Life ohh what a mystery,so full of high's and so full of low's. Is there really a need for all of this, should anyone have to feel the lows that comes with this "Life" Yes of course the high's are the best thing to experience but when you are hit by a low oh what a dreadful blow. Is this gold I have been told about really at the end of the rainbow? We make so much sacrifices for people but are theses sacrifices really even appreciated? We will all fall in love and go to such extremes for these loved one's , but there is always an element of doubt that one question driving you mad. Do they even love you back? Is that spark you fell going to go from bright to dark will it disappear ? Is it always I that shall make the effort is this even worth the panic and frustration? Of course with this love there is light, a light trying to tell you there is hope, but is it all a dream ? Is this light really even there? Is there even a point me being here to have to suffer this torment ? But I then gather myself and recollect all the good time's and think "this is Life"

Author's Note

Just a bit of experimenting be honest any problems or any where I can improve please tell me .

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Lots of questions in this introspective write. The truth is, if you never try, you will always have regrets in life. When you jump, the safety net will appear...as it is written. Lots of thought provoking concepts here. I liked it. Lydi**

[Cathalwatkins]

Thank you lydi