Dear suicide

Dear suicide,
Your on my mind Day or night
When life sucks
you could be by my side
Cutting just another
Form of suicide
Going against things we believe
To numb the pain

Dear suicide
You end so many lives
Why must we die
Because of suicide
How did life get so bad and when did the world create so many suicides.

You will not take my life
I will not die to teen suicide

Reviews

[Zachary_James]

Many people, ask themselves the same question. Why must we have suicide? i really enjoyed this piece. Great job

[Zoya]

enjoyed the poem... !!! i liked the title...!!!

[Justin]

thanks

[Broken Wings]

Nice :)

[Justin]

yupp :P

[Broken Wings]

Sorry...don't know if I should've put a smile.