Sound

Sound

A Poem by Castilios
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A poem.....about sound Kyrielle

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Noises, noises, all that we hear
Noises that our hearts cannot bear
Crescendos reaching  to the sky
Sound will pierce through any veil
All that is good, all that is bad
None would know if'nt heard what we had
Though words of false are very sly
Sound will pierce through any veil
Noises are destined to be made
Minds of the weary will be swayed
Words of the wise will make them cry
Sound will pierce through any veil
Sound shows to be a novice thing
Wrongly we may forever sing
All will find their ways to get by
Sound will pierce through any veil

© 2016 Castilios


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This is grand! Love the imagery, many lines are juicy throughout this poem, and the musicality flows relatively smoothly. In fact, it would still flow smoothly if you decontract your contraction (write "if not")....also because it looks better. Well done!

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