First love

Written in 1978. When youth was my advantage.

                      












             












 First love

A sweet and beautiful smile opening the door to conversation.
The first taste of the sweet kiss.
Two hands becoming one.
Long walks and talks leading  two people to sweet dreams and wishes.

The feeling of love can't be stop.
When love touches the heart.
Life had reason and purpose.

When my love is near.
I feel alive and strong.
I feel weak and safe at the same time.

All I do is think of my love.
The girl with the beautiful blue eyes and  who love to dance.

Her love torn down years of disappointment.
I feel strong and content.
I need her body near.
To taste her sweet lips day and night.

To swim in her love forever and know peace.

Sweet love, paradise of the warm sun and cold nights.
Allowed two hearts to become one.

I will always love you my beautiful Daniela.

                            Coyote
                             1978

Author's Note

A old poem. Good to look back to know you were young once.

Reviews

[Becky C Strukamp]

Your journeys into the past are so heart warming and tender. Love does strange things to us and without it I believe we are lost souls. Our first loves, so endearing. And you are so right, the feeling of love can not be stopped. Another wonderful poem, and each stanza holds it own merit. thanks for sharing your heart and soul with us.

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

This is really beautiful, Coyote. :)





Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

[Xhiljola]

such honest emotion...beautiful write, absolutely beautiful

[Barbara Walker]

You always write with honest emotion, always enjoy reading your works. My issue is with grammar, as usual, you know me! Writing of the past, so you should use past tense- first line ...opened the door to conversation. 5th line-...can't be stopped. 12th line-...loved to dance. 13th line-Her love tore down..Great write!

[Sandy Beach]

Brings to mind an old Sonny James song - Young Love - It doesn't get any better than that "first love".

[Calypso]

I feel like I am experiencing my first true love. I can say youth is a good impotent there. Very nice poem

[Ellie Howard]

beautifully written.

[Luke Ritta]

fantastic writing once again from you....really enjoyed this piece of writing.

[Humor Me]

good written :)

[Rene Velez]

you never fail to touch the heart, another gem my friend.

[joshua deathdealer]

A lovely and stirring poem. Thank you!!