First love

Written in 1978. When youth was my advantage.

                      












             












 First love

A sweet and beautiful smile opening the door to conversation.
The first taste of the sweet kiss.
Two hands becoming one.
Long walks and talks leading  two people to sweet dreams and wishes.

The feeling of love can't be stop.
When love touches the heart.
Life had reason and purpose.

When my love is near.
I feel alive and strong.
I feel weak and safe at the same time.

All I do is think of my love.
The girl with the beautiful blue eyes and  who love to dance.

Her love torn down years of disappointment.
I feel strong and content.
I need her body near.
To taste her sweet lips day and night.

To swim in her love forever and know peace.

Sweet love, paradise of the warm sun and cold nights.
Allowed two hearts to become one.

I will always love you my beautiful Daniela.

                            Coyote
                             1978

Author's Note

A old poem. Good to look back to know you were young once.

Reviews

[Becky C Strukamp]

Your journeys into the past are so heart warming and tender. Love does strange things to us and without it I believe we are lost souls. Our first loves, so endearing. And you are so right, the feeling of love can not be stopped. Another wonderful poem, and each stanza holds it own merit. thanks for sharing your heart and soul with us.

[Lindsay T]

This is so beautiful! I love how you portrayed first love and made the reader know exactly how you're feeling. Must have been someone special :)

[Suditi]

Truly, utterly, totally beautiful.
Wow.

[KAREN]

Nice flow, And the reader can feel the love you have for this woman. Very nicely done!

[The Pain Stays Fresh]

This is so beautiful. Full of emotion. Very touching. A wonderful piece.

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Beautiful and sincere, how do i know it? I can read it !
That makes me want to have my first love soon :)

[iliketowrite]

I honestly feel like the grammar issue adds to the poem, somehow. It's beautiful in a simple way, in the same way that first loves are.

[quinfinn]

very heartfelt and full of radiant warmth, you have nailed the fuzzy side of love here beautifully...excellent write!

[Junger]

Awe first love how it feels in ones heart i know the feeling and i respect what u have said in this piece it demonstrates how all it goes to that special person i love this piece keep making your poems

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

when love touches the heart, life always has purpose, I agree.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A piece that lends to the times we all had thoughts of promise, well done, good read.